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Paternity by CassetteSet Paternity by CassetteSet
"You're gonna be a great flyer some day Rainbow Dash, just like daddy."

This had been sitting, unfinished in my folder for weeks. I thought it would be a nice piece to complete.

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theawesomeblossom Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
TheFineBrony Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Student Writer
I wish I could draw half as good as you. Great job!
AC-whiteraven Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
very cute, you've inspired me to draw something with those two characters :3
CassetteSet Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013
Awesome! I'm all for more pictures with Rainbow Dad, can't wait to see it!
Tarzok Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013
cajobif Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013
Rainbow Dash: But daddy.... what if I become even better than you?
Dad: Well, Rainbow Dash... don't stop and become the best flyer Equestria ever seen.
Rainbow Dash: Daddy....
Dad: *smiles* I'd be so proud of you.... my little Dashie...
Rainbow Dash: *tears and smile*
Dad: But until then, you'll need to do your homeworks, eat your vegetables and practice much more instead of taking those naps on the clouds...
Rainbow Dash: Awwww d'dad....
Dad: Hey! You'll need a lot of work before beating me at a race...
Rainbow Dash: Oh, be so sure that I'll beat you someday, d'dad... and that day will be glorious!
Dad: Yes. That day will be. My little filly will become a big girl.... *smile*
Rainbow Dash: *stare at him with tear in her eyes and mouth stand agape* Oh! Daddy.... *flying to her father and hug him*
Dad: *returns the hug* You'll always be my little Dashie *kiss on her forehead* *tear in his eye*
Rainbow Dash: I love you daddy.
Dad: *tight the hug one last time before letting her go* *sigh* Let's go home before it's becoming too dark.
Rainbow Dash: *nod*
Dad: Back home, you'll be able to clean your room.... you know... the one you forgot to clean yesterday?
Rainbow Dash: What? But I did it last week!
Dad: It needs a cleaning, big time.
Rainbow Dash: *sigh* Uh... didn't you just said that I needed to practice more? Cleaning my room would make me... uh... lose precious time for practice and....
Dad: Nice try. You practice in the day, not in the night. Since we're this close to the night... I wouldn't recommend any.
Rainbow Dash: But d'dad...
Dad: Enough. You'll clean you room, little one.
Rainbow Dash: Tsh! Fine. So.... first one at home is a.... chicken! *she flies in direction of their home*
Dad: Hey! Not fair! *to himself* (She surely will be a very fine pegasus one day. I'm sure she'll fly faster than anypony in no time. But what a stubborn filly!) Wait for me, cheater! *begins to fly in Rainbow Dash direction*
Rainbow Dash: Haha! Too slow! Come on daddy, mom is waiting....
Dad: to himself (And a cocky one too! Must take that from her mother.)

Wonderful work. It inspired me this short story. Tell me if you like it.
CassetteSet Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013
That was really adorable dialogue, and well paced.

I love it, thank you so much for sharing this!
cajobif Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013
My pleasure.

Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked it, but it's thanks to your artwork that the story came in mind. Really.
Arrowhead-of-doom Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013
I can't even begin to say how great your short fic was. It's just so well done. You have a talent for this.
cajobif Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013
Thank you very much. I'm glad you like it. The great artwork helped a lot.

I've been doing this since a couple of months now.
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